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FAB5 AUR MANAN (Chapter 1)

Heya guyz, I am totally surprise, so many comments on a promo, then what vil happen when story vil proceed further, btw I don’t have any prob n thanx so much guyz for the support, now let’s get started

Chapter 1 – Accident

It was a beautiful morning. A boy was sleeping peacefully but the peace was gone when sun rays disturbed his sleep. He woke up stretching hands n yawning. He was smiling to fullest as it was a special day. It was 50th concert of Fab5. He went to take bath n came out. He made a conference call to Fab4 who were still asleep. Their sleep was disturbed by Manik. They all took the call and
Cabir: kya yaar! Itni subha kyu call kiya?
Manik: tu abhi tak soraha hai jaldi uth
Mukti: manik itni subha kyu uthaya?
Manik: tumlog bhool gaye aj kya hy?
All in union: oh shit!! It’s our 50th concert today! How can we forget?? Manik was laughing on all. All were angry with him.
All in union: y r u laughing haa.
Manik: bcoz u all are duffers, now wake up n get ready. We vil meet backstage n practice a lil to make concert “perfect”.
They all said k n went to freshen up. After 2 hours they all met at their concert place n practiced till 4 hours. It was 4pm now. They all had lunch. Now they all were checking their dresses,lightings, mikes n etc. It was time for concert. They all took their positions. Cabir with drums, Dhruv with guitar, Alya with piano, Mukti with electric guitar n finally our hero Manik with his guitar. Lights went off n 5 spotlights were shown on Fab5. Manik came forward n started
Maula……
Mere Maula Maula Mere Maula
Maan Matwala Kyun Hua Hua Re
Maan Maula Maula Mere Maula
Mere Maula

Kis Taraf Hai Asmaan
Kis Taraf Zameen
Khabar Nahi Khabar Nahi
Ooohhhh
Jab Se Aaya Hai Sanam
Mujhko Khud Ki Bhi Khabar Nahi
Khabar Nahi
Hoooohhh
Hosh Gul Sapno Ki Mein Bandhu Gull
Aankh Kab Khuli
Khabar Nahi Khabar Nahi
(Cabir) –
Hoo Hoo
Kis Taraf Hai Asmaan
Kis Taraf Zameen
Khabar Nahi Khabar Nahi

Mere Maula Maula Mere Maula
Maan Matwala Kyun Hua Hua Re
Maan Maula Maula Mere Maula
Mere Maula
(Dhruv) –
Jaane Kab Kahan Kaise
Tere Ho Gaye Kaise
Hum To Sochte Hi Reh Gaye
Aur Pyaar Ho Gaya
Mere Khawaab Dil Sansein
Mil Ke Kho Gaye Aise
Tujko Dekh Ke Aisa To Kai Baar Ho Gaya
Tu Kahe Dil Yeh Tera Hi Rahe
Aur Kya Kahun
Khabar Nahi Khabar Nahi

Oooo…
Kis Taraf Hai Asmaan
Kis Taraf Zameen
Khabar Nahi Khabar Nahi

Mere Maula Maula Mere Maula
Maan Matwala Kyun Hua Hua Re
Maan Maula Maula Mere Maula
Mere Maula
(Manik) –
Kis Taraf Hai Asmaan
Kis Taraf Zameen
Khabar Nahi Khabar Nahi
Ooohhhh
Jab Se Aaya Hai Sanam
Mujhko Khud Ki Bhi Khabar Nahi
Khabar Nahi
Hoooohhh
Hosh Gul Sapno Ki Mein Bandhu Gull
Aankh Kab Khuli
Khabar Nahi Khabar Nahi

Mere Maula Maula Mere Maula
Maan Matwala Kyun Hua Hua Re
Maan Maula Maula Mere Maula
Mere Maula
N he ended the song. The lights were on, everyone were clapping n shouting. The concert was a hit. Everyone packed up n went to Malhotra Mansion. It was raining when they reached home n Manik was tensed after watching the rain. He felt like something bad is gonna happen.
Dhruv: buddy let’s party. It’s a big day today.
Alya: yah Manik! Dhruv is right we should party.
Mukti: haa Manik ye dono sahi keh rahe hy hame party karni chye am hamaraa 50th concert hua hai.
Cabir: guys wait. Take breath, kyu tum sab ek saath kudrahe ho uspar use bhi toh kehne do.
All in union: haa Manik bolo na.
Manik was lost somewhere. Cabir patted his shoulder n said
Cabir: Manik kya hua? kaha khoya hua hai? yeh sab party karna chahte hy.
Manik: nahi Cabir hum party nhi krnge.
Cabir: kyu nahi krnge aj itna bada din hy hume party karni chye.
Manik: maine kaha na tu kyu nhi smjraha.
Cabir: mai kya nahi smjraha, aisi kya baat hai jo to party nhi karna chahta
Manik(tensed): pata nahi yaar, aaj bhut ajeeb feeling arahi hai, aisa lagrha hy jaise kuch bura hone wala hai.
Mukti: Manik tujhe aisa kyu lagraha hy?
Manik: Mukti tujhe feel nhi hraha hai to na ho lekin hum party nhi krnge. Hum ghar se bahar nahi jaenge.
Mukti: thik hy hum ghar se bhar nahi jaenge lekin party ghar mein toh krskte hy na?
Alya: yah that’s good idea.
Dhruv: bol buddy hum ghr par toh party kar skte hy na?
Manik: thik hy.
All in union: yayyy
After 3 hours of partying n drinking they all were drunk. Cabir received a call n he took the call. Cabir was shocked after the call. Manik noticed him.
Manik: kya hua cabir tu itna pareshan kyu hy?
Cabir(shocked): mom ka accident ho gaya hy aur doc meri sign mang rha hy, jab tak mai sign nhi krnga wo oprtn nhi krnge.
Manik(shocked too): kyaa? Wo doc pagal hgya hy, use pata hy ki wo teri mom hy.
Cabir: yaar ye time iss baato ka nhi hy , chal jaldi kar hume jana hoga.
Manik: haa chal.
Alya, Mukti n Dhruv also insisted for going n Fab5 left.

On the Road
Cabir was driving like a maniac n achanak unki car ka accident hogaya aur unki car turn hgyi. They all were bleeding. Someone was passing by n called the hospital. Hospital was nearby so Ambulance reached in 5min. They all were unconscious. After 1 hour of unconscious Mukti woke up with heavy head, she saw she was in hospital . She reminicsed what happened 1 hour ago, she removed all the injections from her hand n came out of her room. A nurse saw her n asked
Nurse: mam y u came out of ur room. U need rest.
Mukti(shouting): how should I take rest when my family is hurt. Where r they?
Nurse: mam, Dhruv sir n Alya mam r out of danger but
Mukti: what but? How is Manik n Cabir?
Nurse: they both r in critical state. They have lost lot of blood.
Mukti(shouting): what?? If they have lost the blood, give them blood n where are Dhruv n Alya?
Nurse took her to Dhruv n Alya’s room. She had tears in her eyes seeing her family in this state. She sat beside Dhruv n held his hand, she started crying, tears fell on dhruv’s hand. Dhruv became conscious n he asked
Dhruv: mukti, kya hua, tum kyu ro rahi ho
Mukti: aur kya karu smile karo tum sab ko aise dekh kar.
Dhruv: Alya , Manik r Cabir kaha hai r kese hy?
Mukti: Alya thik hy par
Dhruv: par kya Mukti
Mukti: par Manik n Cabir critical hai. They have lost lot of blood.
Dhruv: haa toh doc blood denge na unhe.
Mukti: haa, I know. Meanwhile Mukti went to see Alya. She also asked the same n her answer was also same. Mukti was in her room when a nurse approached her.
Nurse: mam, what’s ur blood group?
Mukti: A+, why do want to know my blood group?
Nurse(lowering her head): actually mam, Manik sir’s blood group is rare n v don’t have the blood in hospital nor in any blood bank.
Mukti(shouting): what the hell?? Did u ask Dhruv n Alya, if their blood don’t match then find it from anywhere but nothing should happen to him.
Doc(entering the room): mam, plzz stop shouting this is hospital not ur home. Plzzz calm down.
Mukti: how can I calm down, when my family is hurt. Plzz do something.
Doc: mam, Mr Cabir is k but Mr Manik isn’t. He is still critical, if he don’t get blood in next 15 mins then
Mukti: then what doc??
Doc(lowering his gaze): maybe he can die.
Mukti was shocked!!!

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